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Manuscript Feedback for Fiction Authors
If something in your story feels off, but you can’t quite put your finger on it, this is where we figure it out.
I read your manuscript the way a real reader experiences it. I’m paying attention to where things pull me in, where I start to lose interest, and where something feels confusing or unfinished.Then I walk you through those moments so you can see exactly what’s happening on the page and what might need to shift.
What I Pay Attention To
As I read, I’m watching for things like:
- Slowed or lost momentum
- Where character choices don’t fully land
- Repetitive or unclear spots
- Moments that should hit harder but don’t yet
The goal isn’t to overwhelm you with notes. It’s to help you understand what’s actually happening in your story so you can make the right changes with confidence.
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